- レコメンド
ここでははじめまして
BMS制作の練習用に２時間ぐらいで作曲したかなりシンプルなトリップホップです
低難易度譜面しか作ったことがないんで、高難易度のものは同梱してないんですが余裕があれば作ろうかと思っています
特にこだわったりはしてませんが、自分でBGAを制作したのは初めてなのでその部分ではかなり時間をかけました
そのBGAなんですが、元ネタの関係上人によって不快になるようなシーンもあるので閲覧注意です
分かりにくいと思いますが…
ogg版も用意しているので、容量大きいのが苦手な方はこちらで。
https://anonymous.nekokan.dyndns.info/data/obscure_ogg.zip (ogg 17MB)
P.S.「#PLAYER 3」の件ですが、かねてから疑問に思ってた部分だったので、そのような理屈でそういった現象が起こっている事が知れて良かったです。
私の他の過去作にも同様のミスが見受けられると思いますが、そこまで致命的ではないと考えているのと、ハッシュの関係で混乱を招く可能性があるため、このままにしておく事にします。
ご指摘ありがとうございました。
無題
- hpx
- レス (1件)
Played 7K NORMAL.
I got the feeling of an surreal, misty atmosphere, and I thought the mood was very well-set. Especially I enjoy the hazy tone of the pads.
From a production standpoint, I thought it might be better to use a more breakbeat-like kick and snare for this type of trip hop, or at least have them stand out more in the mix through volume and compression. (I understand the song was made on short notice so there may have not been much time to worry about mixing.)
From an arrangement standpoint, the guitar's appearance sounds sudden. I think it would sound more natural if the guitar was preceded by a fill or reverse cymbal, and if there were some sort of cymbal or impact on the measure where the guitar starts. (It may also be that the guitar is rather loud.)
Despite this nitpick, I really like the inclusion and sound of the guitar itself. It's an interesting development that brings to mind atmospheric rock like shoegaze, etc.
Basically the song is really good (though I am biased as I favor trip hop and downtempo), but would shine more with further polish.
When I first started working on this piece, I was trying to make it simple and plain.
But, in the middle of making it, I thought it was too boring, so I hastily added a guitar at the end, which certainly made the piece a bit half-baked.
In that sense, I also think that I didn't make that part slow and steady enough.
The idea of adding a breakbeat-like sample didn't really come to mind, so I'm going to take your opinion into consideration as an option when writing songs in the future.
Thank you for your impression.
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